Workshop Forum


Kelli Allen's avatar
Kelli Allen
@kelli
Admin
Member
Joined: Jan 5, 2026
Last seen: Jul 2, 2026
Topics: 0 / Replies: 18
Reply
RE: Cake Batter

Comments attached again as I can not see them here, so guess you could not either. =)  Melody-su26-wk-3-comments.docx

5 months ago
Reply
RE: A pooem on aging, with grace

Marc- This one feels finished, ready to be sent into the world, and one you are clearly deeply connected to. Sometimes, the poems speak themselves a…

5 months ago
Reply
RE: WK2 Cigarettes in the Ocean

O C E A N !!!!   Comments attached!  Melody-summer26-wk2-comments.docx

5 months ago
Reply
RE: Safe

Comments attached!  Melody-May-wkshp-1-comments.docx

6 months ago
Reply
RE: Ariadne again

Comments attached!  Kayla-May-wkshp-1-comments.docx

6 months ago
Reply
RE: When I am with Eric, I feel safe

Comments attached!  Marc-May-wksh-1-comments.docx

6 months ago
Reply
RE: Memoir and poem

@marc-petrie You are an amazing person, Marc, and your life story is worth every moment of time you spend in the telling. Keep pushing to complete the…

8 months ago
Reply
RE: The Wasps Are Thankful Even Without Words

Comments and observations attached!  Eric-final-SP26-workshop-comments.docx

8 months ago
Reply
RE: Memoir and poem

Comments attached, my good sir!  Marc-final-workshop-SP26-comments.docx

8 months ago
Reply
RE: The Long Haiku

Detailed in-text comments (in blue, through Track Changes) are attached!  SP26-Eric-wk3-comments.docx

8 months ago
Reply
RE: The Long Haiku

Before tossing my full comments into this ring, yes, MLA is still standard. That said, MLA in-text citations AND footnotes are the current gold star. …

8 months ago
Reply
RE: boxes

Comments attached, Marc. This is clearly a painful piece and I am grateful that you have trusted us with it.  SP26-Marc-wk-3-comments.docx

8 months ago
Page 1 / 2